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Ah, yes, that's a good idea. What sort of thing do you propose? |
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Hey @timkoder, looking at this again now, will add a new 'Conclusions section' to this version. Contributions welcome! |
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Note that section 11 is now the Conclusions https://open-scholarship-strategy.github.io/site/#11-conclusions- |
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@timkoder I have now added a concluding section to this - thoughts? |
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Hi Jon, nice job on the Conclusions. Sorry I didn't reply sooner. Can I challenge you to halve the length, to make it punchier? I've taken 100 words out in the attached, see what you think. Cheers, Tim |
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Brilliant, thank you @timkoder! Will get this integrated right away :) |
timkoder commentedJul 30, 2018
Now that the framework is up in public, looking great, would it make sense to finish not with the Threats section, but with a much more future-looking, aspirational call to action?