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Could we add a strong finish? #26

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timkoder opened this Issue Jul 30, 2018 · 8 comments

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timkoder commented Jul 30, 2018

Now that the framework is up in public, looking great, would it make sense to finish not with the Threats section, but with a much more future-looking, aspirational call to action?
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Protohedgehog commented Jul 30, 2018

Ah, yes, that's a good idea. What sort of thing do you propose?

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Protohedgehog commented Jan 10, 2019

Hey @timkoder, looking at this again now, will add a new 'Conclusions section' to this version. Contributions welcome!
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Protohedgehog commented Jan 13, 2019 •
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Note that section 11 is now the Conclusions https://open-scholarship-strategy.github.io/site/#11-conclusions-
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Protohedgehog commented Jan 23, 2019

@timkoder I have now added a concluding section to this - thoughts?

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timkoder commented Jan 28, 2019

Hi Jon, nice job on the Conclusions. Sorry I didn't reply sooner. Can I challenge you to halve the length, to make it punchier? I've taken 100 words out in the attached, see what you think. Cheers, Tim
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Protohedgehog commented Jan 29, 2019

Brilliant, thank you @timkoder! Will get this integrated right away :)

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Protohedgehog commented Jan 29, 2019

This was fab, thanks @timkoder! Also conveniently more in line with the new executive summary that @brembs added this evening. Good stuff! :)
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